dagbok
a man gave me
his abduction diary
because I was
overly understanding
the sketches spoke
the most, the language
was alien & only
a dream codex
could decipher
the meaning of the words
he left me
in shards of
amber & green
glass, then
drove into a
telephone pole
he lived,
but forgot about
the diary;
I still have it
I just don’t see him
in any form anymore
(February 5, 2022)
good 👍
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you
LikeLiked by 1 person
wowzers, this is intense, Jenn!
❤
David
LikeLiked by 3 people
Thanks for reading ♥️
LikeLiked by 1 person
This stirred something inside me; such a powerful poem, Jennifer.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you, Tre 💚💚
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’re quite welcome.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I’ve eaten up every line five times over. The level this speaks to is deep and mysterious and I live for that.
LikeLiked by 4 people
Thank you for reading! I’m glad its vagueness & simplicity speak to you. 🙂💜
LikeLiked by 1 person
So much said and unsaid in a few lines. I love when someone writes in a way that I can shift perspective and see from many people’s viewpoints.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Beth 💙
LikeLike
Wow Jennifer
This one pierced me right in the heart..
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you for reading!
LikeLiked by 1 person
I’ve come back for the third time today to read this. Absolutely brilliant, Jennifer ❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
Aww thank you ❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
👍🏻💕👍🏻
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks, Ruth!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Love the “the language / was alien & only / a dream codex / could decipher” lines. Great work!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
A superb poem with an offbeat and strange logic that works its way smoothly into the mind!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks, Dominic
LikeLiked by 1 person
Welcome Jennifer!
LikeLiked by 1 person
This could be a long interesting story. Love it!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you 🙂❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
Lots of different meanings you could glean from this – lovely verses that stay with the reader! ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Tom
LikeLiked by 1 person