#NaPoWriMo 2021 Day 5 : Tricube Poems




I just learned about the tricube form of poetry & thought I’d experiment with a few for today.


Tricube Experiments

I.
ocean mist
clouds the eyes,
grief visage

echoed cries,
losing it,
mourning time

where to find
steady ground?
death’s around

II.
one breath in
one step out,
the heart shouts

cold warnings,
danger near,
disappear

unseen fears
keep me here,
ears roaring

III.
enemies
camouflaged
in plain sight

in small smiles,
shining clothes,
normalcy

like seasons
they can turn,
twist like knives


Published by Jennifer Patino

Poet.

16 thoughts on “#NaPoWriMo 2021 Day 5 : Tricube Poems

  1. You’re introducing me to the tricube form, and I like the idea. They seem like a trio of short haiku. And I like the three that you’ve written. Each gives suggestions of images and happenings — and us readers can imagine what’s happening beyond the words.

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  2. This is the first time I’m hearing of this form and I absolutely love the way it is formed- neat and straight to the point without losing its sparkle…. A wonderful read, Jennifer😊

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