I just learned about the tricube form of poetry & thought I’d experiment with a few for today.
Tricube Experiments
I.
ocean mist
clouds the eyes,
grief visage
echoed cries,
losing it,
mourning time
where to find
steady ground?
death’s around
II.
one breath in
one step out,
the heart shouts
cold warnings,
danger near,
disappear
unseen fears
keep me here,
ears roaring
III.
enemies
camouflaged
in plain sight
in small smiles,
shining clothes,
normalcy
like seasons
they can turn,
twist like knives
Thistle Thoughts 
👏👏👏 three is definitely the magic number 🤗 your poetry shines through any form xxx
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Thanks, Monty ❤
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ooooh… these are great, Jenn!
❤
David
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Thanks, David
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Best part of NaPo is the chance to experiment – you should be happy with these ones!
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I think they turned out alright, yeah. 🙂
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You’re introducing me to the tricube form, and I like the idea. They seem like a trio of short haiku. And I like the three that you’ve written. Each gives suggestions of images and happenings — and us readers can imagine what’s happening beyond the words.
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Yeah it’s a pretty neat form. Thanks!
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Thanks for introducing me to the tricube, and kudos to you for going the extra mile to pay homage to this style by writing three great ones 👌
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Thanks so much! It’s a fun little form.
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Thanks for introducing me to this form. It looks like fun.
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It really is! 👍
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This is the first time I’m hearing of this form and I absolutely love the way it is formed- neat and straight to the point without losing its sparkle…. A wonderful read, Jennifer😊
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Thank you, Roshni 🙂
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A very good poem! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it! Your talent shines through any form you write in!
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Thanks, Dominic
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Welcome Jennifer.
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