New Poem @ Fevers of the Mind

Hello all. Please check out my new poem, “This Place is a Sorry Excuse for a Hell”, over at Fevers of the Mind.

Published by Jennifer Patino

Poet in Michigan. View more posts

paeansunplugged says:

July 21, 2022 at 7:41 pm

Congratulations, Jennifer! What a punch in the gut.

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1. Jennifer Patino says:
  
  July 21, 2022 at 8:27 pm
  
  Thank you for reading!
  
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  1. paeansunplugged says:
    
    July 22, 2022 at 11:06 am
    
    My pleasure.
    
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Dominic Alapat says:

July 21, 2022 at 8:09 pm

A dark and disturbing poem! Almost every line gives you a sense of shock and pain! Well written Jennifer!

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1. Jennifer Patino says:
  
  July 21, 2022 at 8:27 pm
  
  Thank you, Dominic
  
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  1. Dominic Alapat says:
    
    July 21, 2022 at 8:29 pm
    
    My pleasure Jennifer!
    
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energyrae says:

July 22, 2022 at 3:35 am

Brilliant Jennifer. So very haunting x

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1. Jennifer Patino says:
  
  July 22, 2022 at 8:08 am
  
  Thank you ❤️
  
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Belladonna says:

July 22, 2022 at 1:29 pm

Oh wow!!! This was well written, great job!

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1. Jennifer Patino says:
  
  July 22, 2022 at 4:08 pm
  
  Thank you!
  
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