NaPoWriMo 2024 — Day 24



Eruption

The stars in my blood
are twinkling.

Sunburn your kisses
onto my cheeks

so I feel the stinging
once you decide

to never return
from your evening

strolls. Your worst
habit is making me

miss the way you
shuffle out of your

boots. My addiction
is ruffling your feathers,

running my little hands
across your freshly shorn

head, cradling you like
you’re my child lost

in a new wood. I gobble
up your tears like healing

elixir. I want to drink
them dry as a desert.

I want to thirst for
them. I mean, I want

you to never have
to bother shedding them

because there would never
be a reason to.

I turn supernova
too easily & blind

you with my flash.
Forgive me.

Return like the
nightfall, quickly,

like it’s wintertime
again. When we

remembered to listen
before speaking.

I won’t be so volcanic
the next time. There

won’t even be a
next time with

the promise of
the door clicking

into place. I’ll take
mine next to your heart.

I still belong there,
don’t I?

Image by 3444753 from Pixabay



Published by Jennifer Patino

Poet in Michigan.

8 thoughts on “NaPoWriMo 2024 — Day 24

  1. You write some very beautiful poems Jennifer. I loved the pacing here. It drew me in further and further and the ending made me smile. I believe you asked a rhetorical question, but even if you didn’t great writing.

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    1. Thank you! I felt like the ending was about questioning our value in others’ lives. Self-conscious stuff really. I still struggle with that from time to time. Thanks for all your comments today. πŸ’œ

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